In tech-savvy era and modern world, climate change has become one of the huge problem in front of the entire world. Due to drastic change in earth’s climate and atmosphere, myriad of natural calamities are taking place on the earth. One of the significant reasons for this problem is Greenhouse effect. This essay will discuss why I have chosen this area for study.
To commence with, temperature of earth atmosphere has risen up to three degree Celsius over a century. Primary reason for this climate change is the increase in greenhouse effect due to anthropogenic emissions of carbon dioxide .For instance, many glaciers have melted down due to this. Therefore , it become very necessary to study this field of climate ,so that world can be saved from this devastation.
Furthermore, greenhouse effect has drastically increased due to deforestation. Climate change has a negative effect on farmers, flora and fauna. As a tangible example, a scientific research undertaken by the prestigious university asserted that if greenhouse gases are not controlled, then there will be shortage of food world-wide. Hence, it becomes very significant to study this area.
To recapitulate, this essay discussed that due to temperature rise and deforestation, climate has been drastically changed. In nutshell, I would strongly recommend that greenhouse effect has now become much indispensable to focus to save world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, so, then, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 222.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40990990991 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04285781653 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608108108108 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1891293753 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3846153846 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0769230769 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120121629279 0.242375264174 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496651082126 0.0925447433944 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510950867175 0.071462118173 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077086883576 0.151781067708 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366759073332 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.