Now big cities have many problems. What are these problems? Do you think the government should encourage city residents to move to small cities and towns?
It is true that with the modernisation and urbanisation process, metropolises are increasingly facing several issues. In my opinion, urban citizens should be encouraged to live and work in suburban areas.
There are two main problems that make living in large urban areas to become a burden. Perhaps the first one is that as city residents nowadays are more likely to drive to work rather than walking or cycling, the number of cars has increased rapidly, causing heavily congested conditions. In Hanoi capital, for example, with over five thousand cars registered, traffic jams could not be handled without forcing travellers to wait in a long queue during rush hours. The other major issue is the scarcity of housing due to the overcrowding. In the purpose of earning a living, more and more people move to big cities and this has lead to an increase in housing demands. As a result, people with low or medium incomes who can not afford a house have to live in confined and cheap apartments.
I am of opinion that it is advisable for the government to motivate urban residents to relocate to the suburbs. Firstly, big cities would reap great benefits from this policy as the population density in those areas would decrease considerably. It becomes clear that the intensity of traffic could also be reduced and housing shortages are no longer a problem. Secondly, it is those who move to smaller cities or rural areas that could have a more comfortable life. They could enjoy a better environment with fresh air, green pastures and will not have to face the problem of bumper-to-bumper traffic.
In conclusion, traffic jams and housing pressure are two main issues confronting metropolitan areas and I believe that feasible measures should be taken to motivate urban citizens to relocate to rural areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9900990099 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7444858763 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574257425743 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3703633486 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17053469685 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554607870443 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495800185855 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892028342972 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607643939644 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.