Few people devote their time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effects this has on individual and society in general.
It is an inescapable fact that nowadays individuals prefer to spend less time on the activities they like, due to which there is an increase in their stress and irritation levels. This essay will study the different reasons for this trend and their possible effects on a particular person and on the community as a whole.
There are many factors that contribute in reduction of time given to extra-curricular activities by individuals. First and foremost, it is the pressure of work faced by people these days. With an addition in the number of working hours, people tend to get tired easily and are not left with sufficient energy to devote time to their favorite activities. Secondly, the responsibilities and commitment towards family makes it, further, difficult for an individual to take out time for himself. For instance, the parents who have young children are often found to be indulged in improving their child's ability or proving them better lifestyle. hence, they are unable think about themselves over their children.
This trend could have detrimental effects, both on the person as well as the society. Firstly, the individual will have raised levels of stress and inconvenience, thus, decreasing the happiness quotient in them. This could in return have an adverse effect on their health and their performance at work. Moreover, as per society's perspective, there is an isolation that can been seen among people which effects the relationships of the local community. For example, earlier people with similar interest use to interact and spend time with one another, which brought peace and harmony in the community. While today, people do not even communicate with their neighbors which hampers the contribution of the individual towards community's progress.
To summarize, people paying less attention to their hobbies, may lead to under-development of the individual and hindrance for the growth of society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 642, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
...ility or proving them better lifestyle. hence, they are unable think about themselves...
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Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...detrimental effects, both on the person as well as the society. Firstly, the individual wi...
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Line 5, column 370, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[4]
Message: Did you mean 'can be' or 'has been'?
Suggestion: can be; has been
...perspective, there is an isolation that can been seen among people which effects the rel...
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...e, earlier people with similar interest use to interact and spend time with one ano...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92284261279 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584415584416 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0322401434 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.533333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245877225992 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800218459916 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451150385808 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148662327285 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404383612254 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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