TPO 08
The memoir written by Chevalier has lead to debates on whether or not he has been honest in his writing. The reading authors believe that he is more likely to have been dishonest about some events in order to make his life seem more exciting. The lecturer, however, refutes the arguments presented in the reading passage due to the following reasons.
First, the fact that he had borrowed money, is by no means a good reason to believe that Chevalier had not been wealthy; He could have borrowed money from the merchant for a short amount of time until he received his orders.
Second, there is compelling evidence that Chevalier has written about the conversations he had, using his detailed notes which he used to take after each conversation.
Third, having politically well-connected friends couldn't help Chevalier run away from prison, inasmuch as, there were prisoners at the same time who had more friends than Chevalier did, so, if bribing was possible, they had more chances to escape the prison; But none of them did. Moreover, the history records show that the prison's ceiling needed to be repaired after Chevalier's escape_ that strengthens the possibility that the memo is accurate.
To sum up, even though the lecturer acknowledges that no memo can be thoroughly accurate, she contends that the arguments of the reading are wrong.
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- TPO6_Integrated Writing 3
- TPO 1: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.Use specific reasons and examples to support 66
- TPO 23 75
- TPO5_ Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- TPO 23 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...ten by Chevalier has lead to debates on whether or not he has been honest in his writing. The ...
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Line 1, column 244, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...er to make his life seem more exciting. The lecturer, however, refutes the argument...
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Line 7, column 50, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ving politically well-connected friends couldnt help Chevalier run away from prison, in...
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Line 7, column 326, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'prisons'' or 'prison's'?
Suggestion: prisons'; prison's
...over, the history records show that the prisons ceiling needed to be repaired after Che...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, third, well, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1131.0 1373.03311258 82% => OK
No of words: 225.0 270.72406181 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02666666667 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61241102394 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635555555556 0.540411800872 118% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 419.366225166 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 21.2450331126 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.7740979308 49.2860985944 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.375 110.228320801 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.125 21.698381199 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06452816374 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416262875848 0.272083759551 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162243243948 0.0996497079465 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.092499370015 0.0662205650399 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198875698908 0.162205337803 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953479117024 0.0443174109184 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.3589403974 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 53.8541721854 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.7273730684 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.498013245 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.