space travel have negative or positive effects?
In the threshold of the new era, outer space traveling industry has been booming more than ever. In this regard, whether the advantages of this kind of tourism outweigh the disadvantages ones is a controversial issue. While many people believe that this is a step forward to the future, I however, stand for the opposite idea.
It is irrefutable that the cost required for the cutting edge technology to build a rocket, not to mention about the fuel or other equipment, is really expensive. Accordingly, if there is any trouble during the flight or even before it launch, an enormous amount of money would definitely be a waste. Furthermore, instead of investing such a huge amount of money into a not affordable means of transport for every nation, it would be more wisely if this money is used to develop the education and environment situation of poorer area. To illustrate, Vietnam is a developing country, therefore, it would not be suitable if the Vietnamese try to spend in this area due to the fact that there are many troubles they have to face with in their homeland.
More to the point, the astronaut could have to face with an array of risk as well as health-related problems when they are floating in a non-pressure environment. The Apollo 13, which a part of it exploded right after it landed on the moon, is a great example because even a professional company like NASA had mistakes. It would take a normal person months of training to improve their health and learn how to deal with the problems so that they could secure their lives. As a natural sequel, not only space travel had safety matters but also time consuming.
In conclusion, I believe that every space ship must be carefully checked before it launch by the government. By doing so, we can make sure that the risk would be minimized.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 173, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... sure that the risk would be minimized.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, furthermore, however, if, really, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71383647799 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71507510887 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59748427673 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9563564204 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.307692308 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0898024333959 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336246877002 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502290986335 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.05333728067 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227582621959 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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