Young people spend their free time in shopping malls. This has negative effect on young people and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Youngsters are observed spending majority of their idle time in shopping centers. While some argue in favour of the trend, others are not in agreement. In my opinion, one should manage free time wisely.
Proponents of the idea believe that youngsters relish experience of shopping in malls as a place to spend their free time. For instance, malls offer host of other leisure activities such as cinema, gaming zones which provide enjoyment. Window shopping is another brilliant method especially for youth to improve their knowledge in style and fashion. Another salient benefit is convenience of finding many commodities such garments, groceries under one roof which help saving time.
Despite above benefits, disadvantages of the trend are equal in number if not more. Families have to allocate a certain budget to meet demand of youngsters which they spend on buying unnecessary items. Additionally younger population is easily lured by irresistible offers and they tend to over spend. For instance, offseason discounts, festive sale looking enticing, however are way of extracting money from youngsters through excessive shopping. In some cases, people unknowingly max out their credit cards. Even though being reminded day in day out by their elders and parents that save funds for their future.
To sum up, increase in spending time in shopping malls has its own benefits and drawbacks for younger population. However, with some guidance from elders and a bit of soul searching will prevent them from becoming shopaholics.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in some cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36099585062 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67856384883 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672199170124 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8443202443 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.1333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0666666667 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158579354527 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543006655045 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561007990721 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971570015001 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296471765849 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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