“Vegetarianism is more ethical than eating meat.”
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement. Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
Write between 200 and 300 words.
Eating vegetables and fruits is the new trend in today's modern world since it is considered ethical by people. While there is a section of community who prefers meat for its rich sources of the protein, many argue that there are alternative ways of protein rich food which can be included in the diet. This essay will cover the importance and positive impact of being vegetarian.
Firstly, killing animals for food is impractically unethical. Ideally, no animals should be butchered to form diet of many. Animal meat should not be food for humans. Butchering animals and processing its meat in order to export and sold across the world is a act of violence and not observed closely by all. People should reject meat and promote vegan diet.
On the other hand, animal food is a rich source of protein and part of diet for many people. Especially, children who need proteins in their early ages of development. Moreover, people who play sports requiring high physical activity eat meat, to develop their bodies in order to combat strains of extreme sports. That can be supplemented only via diet which is protien rich for developing physique. Thus, people who are advocating that eating meat is unethical should contemplate on alternative ways.
This essay describes that vegetarian diet is ethical but eating meat is helpful for people involved in strenuous exercises. I completely agree that it is unethical to eat meat. In my opinion, a diet rich in fruits, vegetables and herbs is very soothing for a larger population of the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... to export and sold across the world is a act of violence and not observed closel...
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Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...people involved in strenuous exercises. I completely agree that it is unethical ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, moreover, so, thus, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96138996139 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62313090223 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555984555985 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5039554982 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3125 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0866901051311 0.242375264174 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367182236119 0.0925447433944 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387417484307 0.071462118173 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0649112859001 0.151781067708 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325434361602 0.0609392437508 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 12.6369458128 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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