Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case, and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?
It is true that museums and historical sites often attract foreign tourists instead of local citizens. There are several factors leading to this problem, and various solutions can be taken by the government to draw more local people to visit these places.
To begin with, there are some reasons why local residents are not usually attracted by these locations. Firstly, since many individuals believe that they already have a good understanding about the history of their country, they might find it boring to visit museums. This leads to the fact that people choose to travel overseas to explore new cultures and different customs. Secondly, people usually need to pay a high entrance fee to get inside these spots, which prevents locals who live under difficult conditions from visiting historical places even when they really want to. Consequently, residents might have less or no more interests in learning about their history.
Effective measures should be adopted to attract more local people to visit these sites. The first solution would be to enhance the aesthetic values besides the historical values of the monuments and museums. This can be done by launching a big advertising campaign on television or the Internet to promote their beautiful landscapes. Therefore, this allows more local people to know about the beauty of these spots. Additionally, the government can encourage local residents to come there by holding special events such as festivals or galas. Finally, they should lower admission fee or offer free tickets to local people on a special day to stimulate their excitement.
In conclusion, there are some reasons why museums and historical sites usually attract foreigners instead of local citizens, and solutions should be produced early to tackle this situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, in conclusion, such as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34035087719 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62777268595 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0920733001 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.714285714 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6428571429 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.472592296909 0.244688304435 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157193439202 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978845031226 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.303892801356 0.151304729494 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814158798831 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.