You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost.
You have still heard nothing from the airline company.
Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it.
You should write at least 150 words.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You do NOT need to write your own address.
Dear Sirs,
I was one of the passengers who took the flight from Narita (Tokyo) to Heathrow (London) on 5 August. Unfortunately, my suitcase did not come out after the flight. Although I have explained this Mr. McDonald who was in charge at the Luggage Claim Office I have not heard from him as of now.
My suit case is grey Samsonite whose size is 10 x 95 cm. There are 3 stickers on one side and 1 heart shaped sticker on the other side. My initials "AR" are also written on both sides.
There are a few books and a copy of my thesis in that suitcase which I need for the conference on 19 Aug...
- The pie charts compare the total electricity’s number in Australia and France in the field of fuel source over a 20 year from 1980 to 2000. (re-write) 70
- The diagrams below show the development of a small fishing village and its surrounding area into a large European tourist resort Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 74
- People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can cause this? What solution you suggest? Give the reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.-Syerapke- re-write 70
- Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 75
- average yearly spending by Americans on mobile and landline phone services 80
Although I have explained this Mr. McDonald who was
Although I have explained this to Mr. McDonald who was
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 159 200
No. of Characters: 653 1000
No. of Different Words: 113 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.551 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.107 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.281 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 41 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 22 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 14 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 7 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.9 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.127 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.2 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.372 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.646 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.097 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4