You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost.You have still heard nothing from the airline company.Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about

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You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost.You have still heard nothing from the airline company.Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about

Dear sir/Madam,

I am witting to inquire about my lost suitcase during my last week’s travel; still, I have not heard anything in regard to this case.

Last Saturday, I travelled from Sydney to Brisbane with passenger Id 2567. During boarding, I submitted my suitcase and got a receipt (no.125363).When my plane arrived to Brisbane airport, it is obvious, I went to get it. But to my surprise, it was not there.

The lost suitcase is of red colour and there is a small scratch mark on its bottom left corner. The name “SAGGI” is written on its top right corner. I have my clothes, books...

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Sentence: I am witting to inquire about my lost suitcase during my last week's travel; still, I have not heard anything in regard to this case.
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