The widespread use of the internet has given people access to information on a level never experienced before. How does this increase in the availability of information influence life in today's world? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Internet has brought revolution all around the world. It has connected people all around the world and change the way of life. Because of internet we can say that world is now in our hand. Technology development increases tremendoulsy because of it. There are many reasons for it. We can access any information from anywhere in the world. If we want to access any information we have to just connect with the internet and an information is in front of us. We can upload our data on cloud and we can access it from anywhere in the world using internet. Earlier days it was very difficult to access information other than books or papers. But nowadays it is just a matter of few seconds. In 19th century an internet was not very developed. People always used to read books from library to learn something new. But now, I have myriad resources available resources from which I can learn. We can do an online courses about anything of any field. We do not need to go anywhere. Currently I am doing an online course of Machine learning from Standford Univesity. We can collabrate with the professor of other universities and learn from them or can take part in research work of them. We can also read research papers of any professor. My friend is doing research in field of data science under the professor of other universities. They always communicate via internet and share information with one another. Nowadays internet becomes medium of sharing information. Companies share information about new technologies on internet. So that people can give suggestions and share information with others. We can explore information about any country or place. Using internet we can read about culture, history, tadition or weather etc. If we want to apply for any university in different country then we can get information about that university, talk with professors or students. We have access to all bank account of ours. We can transfer money to any where and we can do online payments. We compare different mobile phones, hotels, countries etc. Recently, I was thinking to buy a new smartphone. So I had recieved all the information about phones and compared different phones. Afther that I was able decide which mobile phone is better. To conclude, an internet has made tremendous change in people's life. Because of internet accesibility of information becomes very easy. We read about any thing from any where, To learn a new thing or to get information about any topic becomes vey easy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2061.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8608490566 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7535526342 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464622641509 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 669.6 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 35.0 20.6003584229 170% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.8077670523 48.9658058833 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.8857142857 100.406767564 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.1142857143 20.6045352989 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.885714285714 5.45110844103 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 22.0 4.88709677419 450% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158310375164 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528859082251 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459366725297 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158310375164 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 58.1214874552 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.02 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.