Tech affects life. What's your opinion
In the threshold of the new era, a burgeoning number of people are concerning about the dominating role of technology in life. In this regard, whether this revolutionary hi-tech gadgets on human-being should be reduced is a highly debated issue. While some disapprove this, I am, however, of the opposite side.
Profoundly, it is irrefutable that technology has strong impacts on all walks of life. Firstly, acting as effective assistance tools, electric devices have changed much how people work and study. Life must be easier through social network sites like Facebook or Tweeter for communication, education and, especially, entertainment which blurs the border between work and leisure. More to the point, thanks to advanced household appliances, residents are now allowed to have their hands free from burden of household chores. In no time, living standard is such upgraded with less labor and more spare-time.
On the other hand, much indispensable is technology to well-being, avoiding abuse of it lessening risks is highly recommended. With Internet, life pace seems to run much faster; overwhelmingly, this makes today populace less patient and miss truly enjoyment in their lifestyles. Provided that one became slaver of machines, it might be difficult to isolate from technical gadgets but essential in an attempt to simplify and better life. Take some developed countries’ dwellers, once finding dull with hustling cities, are on trend to put smart-phones down, set off trips to green or simply an offline meeting to return to a peaceful and balanced life with more real interaction.
To conclude, technology stands for a vital place in human revolution, but some moments in life apart from such manmade machines are increasingly necessary notwithstanding. I would reiterate by saying that advancement of technology brings us more good than harm.
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| 2017-07-23 | lemia13 | 84 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... new era, a burgeoning number of people are concerning about the dominating role of technology...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, while, apart from, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40410958904 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02419560449 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681506849315 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4127445552 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.714285714 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102673668023 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0305023407647 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027807923838 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0565807531133 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190925956641 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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