Some businesses prohibit smoking in any of their offices. Some governments have banned smoking in all public places. Do you agree or disagree that this is the right course of action? Give reasons for your opinion.
Smoking has become a burning issue in the entire world. Some people think that it should be restricted in offices and public places. Whereas, many refute this and proclaims that prohibiting smoking is not the ultimate solution. Both sides of this debate will be analyzed before drawing conclusion.
On the one hand, Smoking is really harmful and injurious to health for both active and passive smokers. In addition, it has been proved in recent medical reports/finding of WHO that passive smoking is even more devastating than active smoking. So it can be argued that smoking in public place and offices could harm the other people around as well. Resultantly, the governments should take care of those who do not smoke but gets affected and the only solution is to ban the public smoking. Moreover, smoking is against the official and corporate norms of service industries. Obviously, it creates pollution as well as smell, which ultimately gives a shabby look to the office and would affect customer services.
On the other hand, smokers are human beings as well and posing restrictions on smoking is actually disrespect for them. Furthermore, cigarettes usually contain nicotine, which enters into the blood of a human being and becomes part of it. So, the addicted people could not survive or work efficiently without it and restrictions on smoking could also affect their health. Moreover, tobacco is one of the leading industries around the globe. It provides employment to thousands of people and earns billions of profit as well as millions of dollars are paid in the form of taxes to the governments. If restrictions are based on smoking, it would ultimately affect this industry.
In summation, it my opinion smoking should be banned in public places as well as offices. But there has to be separate smoking places for smokers to accomplish their taste without hurting other people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disrespected'.
Suggestion: disrespected
...ing restrictions on smoking is actually disrespect for them. Furthermore, cigarettes usual...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, really, so, well, whereas, as to, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08974358974 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68958195354 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554487179487 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4116564498 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.2222222222 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231531072546 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737895422615 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550776632269 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153932720077 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492648521979 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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