Some people choose a career according to the social status and salary it will give them. Others choose a career according to whether they will enjoy the work.
Which do you think is the best way to choose a career? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Certain people choose occupation according to perks they will get out of it. Other choose a job where they love their work. I believe the best way to choose is to go after what you love and enjoy doing instead of monetary benefits it brings with it.
As said by ex-president of India APJ. Kalam “choose a job you love and you will never work a single day in your life”. I tottally agree with this view of choosing a career. If you love what you are doing, it means you are pursuing your dream job. You will put your heart & soul in your work and you will excel not just in your field but will also work for improvements in your work. This, in turns, will help in career building & will eventually result in social status & monetary perks. This way one will achieve both personal as well as financial satisfaction resulting in self-actualization.
On the other hand, if a person is primarily driven by social status & salary, he/she will undertake whatever pays higher. These type of people see upward trend and rapid rise in their disposable income during early days of their career. However, this type of growth is short term. They switch jobs even for minor perks and are not loyal with organizations they work in. Eventually, employers see these frequent switching of careers as negative and these type of people face stagnation in rest of their career life. Secondly, these type of people become jack of everything and master of nothing and thus can’t cope with competition in specialized functions.
I would explain this with my own example. I started my career with a large bank doing monotnous tasks. I did get a good salary but I wasn’t satisfied. I got bored with my routine in just six months. I left that job at a bank and joined a small company as an internee but I love the work. Within a short span on 2 to 3 years I jumped hierarchial levels and is now a partner in the company. This happened just because of my interest in my work. My ex-colleagues at bank are at much lower social levels than me.
I would conclude this essay by favoring to choose a career where one enjoy’s the work rather then by social status or salary. This way one will not only be motivated to work and giving his/her best but will be in better financial position in the long run. Steve jobs was the type of person who pursued his passion and didn’t care about money. Today he is known for innovations he gave to this world. It is worth mentioning here that his net worth was in billions. By pursuing work which one enjoy’s, a person is capable of miraculous inventions and earning a lot more money than others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...monetary benefits it brings with it. As said by ex-president of India APJ. Kala...
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Line 3, column 539, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...This way one will achieve both personal as well as financial satisfaction resulting in sel...
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Line 7, column 104, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ith a large bank doing monotnous tasks. I did get a good salary but I wasn't...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ood salary but I wasn't satisfied. I got bored with my routine in just six m...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...red with my routine in just six months. I left that job at a bank and joined a sm...
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Line 9, column 99, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
... where one enjoy's the work rather then by social status or salary. This way on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 24.0651302605 278% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2172.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 473.0 315.596192385 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59196617336 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60102414785 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526427061311 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 665.1 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 5.43587174349 368% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 16.0721442886 187% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0868335611 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.4 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7666666667 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 8.67935871743 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371556817019 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847751272995 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793085870439 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201736576835 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0996205278776 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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