As a result of electronic inventions such as the computer and television, people do less physical activity, and this is having a negative effect on their health.
To what extent do you agree or disagree
Several new electronic inventions in 20th century were computer and television. In the past, people have more activities and didn’t get their activities with high technologies. Nowadays, inhabitants are very familiar with the technologies. In the developing countries, each other to compete and create new inventions which have negative and positive effect in the future.
Computer and television are used almost everybody in the world. It is hard to imagine what things would be like today without them. Everyone is using computers for business and pleasure. Computers are very helpful ...
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Sentence: Computers are very helpful some people to do their jobs.
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Sentence: Television is one of the entertain everyone who necessary for relax, laugh, and find news.
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Sentence: It is make inhabitants do less physical activity and also make a tremendous impact on our lives.
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Sentence: Also, It's make bad our healthy.
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Suggestion: Refer to bad and our
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