Some people believe that the good leaders are born, whereas others hold the opinion that the leadership qualities could be obtained during the life. Who represents the good leader qualities indeed?
It is commonly believed that great leaders are born to be a leader. However, it is also considered by some that good leadership attributes can be learn in life. I fully advocate for the latter statement because i believe experience is the best teacher.
To begin with, there is no denying the fact that some people are just naturally blessed with the qualities of a good leader. For example, the trait theory which believe that certain people are born or made with some particular qualities that will make them to excel in leadership role, Such people have the ability to inspire others in a variety of ways which includes passion, integrity, courage, sense of responsibility,creativity and humility to name a few that are already pre existing in such individuals. As a result of this, attributes they posses they are considered a born leader.
On the other hand, leaders are made not born. Firstly, behavioral theories believe that people can become leaders through the process of teaching, learning, and observation, this we can definitely all agree with that learning and experience can make a good leader after all leadership is of the heart rather than the head. Secondly, the transformation leadership theory states that an individual can obtain leadership qualities by interacting with others and able to create a solid relationship that results in a high percentage of trust. This will later lead to increase of motivation, both intrinsic and extrinsic in both leaders and followers. Finally, the trait theory was refuted due to the shortfalls in the analyses which categorically said no individual is born with such trait.
In conclusion, although some folks still argues that leaders are born naturally with such leadership qualities. I believe that leadership is a set of skills that can be learned by training, perception, practice and experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 212, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...vocate for the latter statement because i believe experience is the best teacher....
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Line 3, column 422, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , creativity
...egrity, courage, sense of responsibility,creativity and humility to name a few that are alr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, after all, for example, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16831683168 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0366192977 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528052805281 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.9312838306 49.4020404114 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.461538462 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4615384615 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35819863185 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139706431843 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079187596226 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237400153064 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447271030135 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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