TOPIC: Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions?
Global warming and increasing sea level are the top concerns which pose the life-and-death challenges for human races throughout the century. This essay will discuss several associated effects and suggest some solutions to tackle this issue.
It cannot deniable that humans and creatures are under several fatal risks of the rise of greenhouse effect and sea level. To begin with, the most obvious consequence is natural disaster. Recent years, there is a significant growth in the number of natural catastrophic such as drought, earthquake and tornado. Especially, flood and tsunami occur more frequently as a result of the ocean surface rise. The negative impact above goes hand in hand with the large variety of creatures on the verge of extinction. It is impossible for many species to adapt to the climate change and suffer natural disasters. For example, the worse situation of thaw in Southern pole is gradually destroying the living space of the bear inhabiting here, which welcome this animal to endangered list. Finally, the survival of humans is under alarming threats as never before. The world steadily turns into an insecure place and life becomes a struggle due to severe weather and potential perils.
Followed these above influences, measures for this issue are presented below. The first and foremost step is restricting gas emissions and exhaust fumes which are the major factors resulting in greenhouse effect. As long as the earth’s temperature is controlled, the situation of ice melt will be partly prevented, which retards the speed of sea level rise. Besides, it is eligible for humans to develop plans to adapt environment. For instance, facilities must be designed to sustain in face of nature catastrophic. Additionally, saving water from now on is also the core strategy which saves people from the dark future.
In conclusion, the world obviously is suffering the massive influences of global warming. However, it is my firm conviction that if steps are implemented efficiently, there is no doubt that our planet has been ever the safe and worth-living place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27380952381 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79923965219 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636904761905 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2513935944 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2631578947 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6842105263 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.10526315789 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163493150854 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439693767723 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474539149872 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979814793712 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682318938215 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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