Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?
Not only once had I learned about the vegetarian diet when I turned on TV or flicked through the pages of a newspaper. Whether people shouldn't consume meat and become a vegetarian can be a matter of considerable debate. I completely agree with the point of view. In this essay, I will support my opinion with examples.
On the one hand, people will certainly encounter some troubles if they feed meat too much. Firstly, using food which contains bad substances can cause much serious health risks such as cancer, obesity. As a result, people who suffer some diseases from uncontrolled diet have to pay much money for treating diseases. Secondly, nowadays, farmers usually use chemical substances which increase cattle's weight impact many negative influences for consumers. For example, in Viet Nam pigs are sprayed chemicals which have an ability to cause cancer. It will assemble in the human body and affect harmfully to health.
There are also many benefits when people become a vegetarian. The major advantage is that causing- cancer substances such as cholesterol can be reduced because of the fact that a healthy vegetarian diet is typically low in fat and high in fiber. Finally, the mortality rate can be declined. However, people need to have a balanced diet because many positive substances for people aren't contained in plant foods such as protein.
In conclusion, although healthy, a vegetarian diet is not for everyone and it requires care in the choice of foods and preparation of meals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0843373494 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67586235651 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638554216867 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2079357047 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178493777501 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555014514312 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454708511542 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110608014243 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365445032318 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.