Do you agree or disagree? Rather than help children with their schoolwork, parents should encourage their children do their work independently.
Schoolwork has always been the concerns for parents and it is often seen that parents devote lots of their time to help the children to complete school work. Some people see this trend as disturbing and believe that guardians should motivate their kids to finish the schoolwork independently. I firmly believe that every parent must strive to make the children independent.
It is generally seen that parents who help their children in school work creates different problems for their own ward. First of all, too much help and guidance make the kids highly dependable on their parent and if this continued for longer period of time then feeling of insecurity arises in children, if they do not find parents with them. Gradually this makes the children not only shy but also make incompetent to take their own decision in later phases of life. Secondly, seeing parent completing work, some children become lethargic and do not make any efforts to achieve their goal. For example, my nephew who is pampered by family members has become stubborn and never takes the work seriously, particularly the work related to his study.
Parents who guide their children to become dependent have some valid reasons. To begin with, children who finish their school task, get feeling of being responsible and such habits creates magic in professional life too. In addition to this, such children develop problem solving attitude and gather high confidence which help them to win the challenges in life. For instance, famous football player, Lion messy was independent since his childhood and took his decision to seek future in game and became the famous player in world.
To conclude, though parents help their kids in different tasks in order to make them learn better, it is also required to make them independent so that children should not suffer low in confidence in any phase of life and able to take life challenges alone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 242, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...parent and if this continued for longer period of time then feeling of insecurity arises in ch...
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Line 4, column 92, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...erent tasks in order to make them learn better, it is also required to make them indep...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45827683551 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.952639357 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.076923077 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397767659249 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163192140639 0.084324248473 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923739223324 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251731474635 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918238138366 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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