tpo 17-1
Although the passage introduces three main hypothesis to support the fact that birds population has been decreased in the United State recently and this trend will be continued in future, the professor finds all the reasons dubious and brings up three conspicuous points to refute them all.
Considering the first point, the reading material argues that human population expand causes vanishing the bird’s habitat such as wetlands and forests and convert them to the places for human settlements. However the speaker finds it unconvincing and asserts that urban growth has increased bird’s population. Although it has declined some birds’ population, it has increased some other type of birds throughout the cities.
Furthermore, the reading passage claims that with increase in human population, the demands for more food enhances and the agricultural activities will be increased which results in more wild lands become agricultural lands. In contrast, the lecturer states that United States has recently used less lands to grow more crops which means no more lands should be used for agricultural activities.
Eventually the author holds the view that using toxic pesticides and chemical materials to prevent harmful insects and species for crops results in water pollution which birds use. It also causes birds stop breeding. Whereas the speaker contends that the effect of pesticides were important in past but in future the use of pesticides will be decreased due to the fact it has changed a lot. not only are new pesticides less toxic but also they are genetically improved which birds can use them without any harm.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hypothesis' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hypotheses', 'hypothesises'.
Suggestion: hypotheses; hypothesises
...hough the passage introduces three main hypothesis to support the fact that birds populati...
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Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...cently and this trend will be continued in future, the professor finds all the reasons du...
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Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...em to the places for human settlements. However the speaker finds it unconvincing and a...
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Line 5, column 296, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun lands is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...es that United States has recently used less lands to grow more crops which means no...
^^^^
Line 7, column 392, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Not
...d due to the fact it has changed a lot. not only are new pesticides less toxic but...
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Line 7, column 404, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... fact it has changed a lot. not only are new pesticides less toxic but also they ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, so, whereas, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1373.03311258 101% => OK
No of words: 259.0 270.72406181 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37451737452 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69304950111 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 145.348785872 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 419.366225166 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.4385646348 49.2860985944 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.2 110.228320801 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9 21.698381199 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 7.06452816374 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.4738696965 0.272083759551 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174678152858 0.0996497079465 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373217354961 0.0662205650399 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242366497678 0.162205337803 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593329862251 0.0443174109184 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.3589403974 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.8541721854 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.2367328918 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 63.6247240618 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.7273730684 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.