the charge of education
It is argued that the cost of learning in university which should be free for anybody. However, I partly agree with this opinion.
I believe that by making education free will motivate more people to go to university. Firstly, people not having money will not drop out of college. The government will not waste the talent of the country. They make a great contribution to society. Secondly, education has an important role to play in the growth of an individual. It helps foster in the young the morally sound values and outlook the world and life.
On the other hand, in contrast, the cost of tertiary is free which has the negative impact on society. It creates the heavy burden of finance for the government. The curriculum will be not satisfactory. Another effect is students do not make an effort to their studies lead to boring and left school before graduate university.
In conclusion, for the reason I have mentioned above, I strongly believe that to the curriculum have a negative effect, instead of the government free the charge of their studies, they should cut down expense comfortably.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 188.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87234042553 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68686003361 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585106382979 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.5049466097 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4615384615 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4615384615 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107391106142 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0263630033265 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494033611598 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0474941309269 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484181209037 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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