02/10/2017
With an increasing population communicating via the internet and text messaging, face to face communication will become a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree?
Many aver face-to-face communication has been becoming obsolete and it will have been substituted by the internet based one in the nearest future. I disagree with this prospect and below the reasons on which my stance is based will be discussed in details.
On the one hand, the popularity of communicating via such web services as Facetime, Skype and Telegram has been steadily growing in the XXI century because of several factors. Firstly, exploiting the new technology allows businesses to make money and to organize work of company more efficiently. Many firms have offices that are situated in different parts of the globe and the modern services give them an indispensable opportunity to coordinate the work among branches without serious investments. Secondly, a plethora of people started to use their smartphones and laptops to communicate because it is extremely convenient. An individual may talk about problems with colleagues as well as to converse with his relatives without leaving his apartments or even being in a bed. Those are benefits that make the trend plausible.
On the other hand, it appears unlikely that face-to-face interaction will completely disappear in the foreseen future. Primarily, communicating is not a mere exchange of written or spoken information, it includes many additional aspects such as posture, smell and mimics. Unavailability of this complementary data in a conversation led via e-mails or phone calls often causes misunderstanding and misinterpretation of intentions and words a counterpart. Furthermore, a human being has a biological necessity to have a physical contact such as face-to-face contacts to feel happiness. In fact, a novel psychological research showcased a correlation between the increasing usage of the net to communicate and decreasing of population’s level of joyfulness. In other words, those disadvantages make eradication of face-to-face interaction unlikely.
In conclusion, new communication technologies have become popular among folks but the belief the personal contacts will be substituted by the online ones completely is unsound because of the discussed shortages that are associated with the trend.
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
same style re-used:
has been becoming
has been steadily growing
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 332 350
No. of Characters: 1820 1500
No. of Different Words: 199 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.269 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.482 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.322 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 132 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 120 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 92 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 64 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.133 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.145 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.308 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.515 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.019 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...f face-to-face interaction unlikely. In conclusion, new communication technolog...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, as to, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62048192771 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42517427902 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593373493976 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3620534489 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.4 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237953557694 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725411894417 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629842767964 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140519155009 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636875552755 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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