You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course. Write a letter to the college director requesting to change the course.
• What course you are following now?
• Why you are not satisfied with the course?
• What course would you like to change to?
Dear Sir,
My name is Shanal Pathirana, who is studying ‘Intermediate ICT’ under the code number 073, in your university. I am writing this letter to request to change my current course to ‘Advanced ICT’, as I am not pleased with my current course content.
I have been registered in the above mentioned course at the beginning of this month, as I had already followed the basic theories from my secondary school. According to the course content published, I believed it would be more advanced, but it was not as I expected. I am exceedingly displeased with this current situation, since learning this course is not adequate for me and it is similar to what I have already studied.
I would be much obliged to you if you can consider my problem and change the course to ‘Advanced IT’, which will commence on next Friday. I believe this course will be appropriate for me, as I already have the foundation knowledge. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon,
Yours sincerely,
Shanal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 149, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s;, which will commence on next Friday. I believe this course will be appropriate...
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Line 7, column 243, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... already have the foundation knowledge. I am looking forward to hearing from you ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9710982659 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0595130551 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589595375723 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 28.2743258098 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5 76.5299724578 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222233857806 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957141579725 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685381493929 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153002846414 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539071381028 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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