The number of accidents on the roads is increasing. What are the causes? What measures should be taken?
In todays contemporary world, humankind has reached the highest peak ever to manufacture the human needs extremely fast especially vehicles. As the amount of vehicles is increasing, the likelihood of facing with traffic accidents on roads is improving as well. It is true fact that the rice of accidents on roads is caused by different bad driving habits and badly organized rules. What prevents it from happening is to set strict rules against rule breakers.
To consider about accidents on roads, it shouldn’t be ignored that the wide range of causes can be largely responsible for the rice in the number of catastrophic accidents on roads. Namely there are different contributors of accidents including bad driving habits, drunk driving , over confidence, carelessness, poor road conditions, violation of essential rules, navigational errors and others. Precisely, all of causes are likely to come from the lack of knowledge to drive a car. Because professionals can know in any conditions and know the consequences of driving cars when drivers are intoxicated, tired or over-confidence and therefore they don’t drive when they are.
To deal with this problem, different methods may be implemented. The first and effective way to complicate the teaching methods and the level of tests in special drivers schools. Furthermore beginner drivers should be taught not only how to drive the vehicles but also how bad consequences they may face if they are not in the position of driving cars. For example, if the drivers morally understand the results of actions they are doing they don’t drive a car when they don’t feel good to control the vehicles.
Another solution to reduce traffic accidents is to reorganize rules and improve the road conditions by reshaping roads and putting up more road signs, installing speed control devices and providing more speed bumps and humps and reducing car insurance, toughening driving laws and treating law-breakers more harshly such as, revoking the delinquents' driving license. Because such strict methods require from drivers to be more careful. Until such preventive programs are implemented, it is really difficult to lessen the catastrophes on roads.
To recapitulate, it is predominantly considered that improving the knowledge of drivers and being a bit strict to law breakers is solely way to decrease the number of traffic accidents. Being conscious of the value of life doesn’t allow drivers to be the reason for catastrophic events on roads. Human beings are ought to feel and understand whether they are ready to drive a vehicle or not.
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Comments
It is a good essay but some
It is a good essay but some suggestions:
1. Put less content. around 300-350 words are enough. You may make the introduction and conclusion paragraph shorter. The body paragraphs are good.
2. double check essays, look errors like:
the rice of accidents
should be:
the rise of accidents
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Namely,
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Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: Furthermore,
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Suggestion:
...providing more speed bumps and humps and reducing car insurance, toughening drivi...
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Line 7, column 370, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...voking the delinquents driving license. Because such strict methods require from driver...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, really, so, therefore, well, for example, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2209.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 415.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32289156627 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98225769288 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530120481928 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.9 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.4666982025 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.722222222 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0555555556 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61111111111 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197339235497 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601003756625 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524706168894 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109339544193 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489274279667 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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