Some people like to buy and eat their meals at restaurants frequently while others like to do this at home. Which do you prefer? Why?
In today's fast-changing world, people try to have a reasonable speed in their life and besides, try to do not loosing the precise time. In this regards, they are not aware of using the restaurant food and save time or using the home food and save money. As far as I am concerned, the advantages of home foods substantially outweigh those of the other one for quite a few reasons, two monumental of which are elaborated upon hereunder.
The first exquisite reason coming to mind is that there is no proved to say that the restaurants use the healthy ingeridints in their meal. A healthy lifestyle, which is among the greatest concernes of human beings, is inextricably intertwined with their life. Therefore, providing the healthy materials and make the food in home is a convenient way. To be more specific, one of my best friend whom I have known for 5 years was in a hospital for two month inasmuch as using the restaurant foods. He said me that if my wife was not at home I would passed away. Moreover, it is worth mentioning that this foods invariably have a nice smell and additionally, are delicious.
Last but not the least is that the restaurant foods make more money than the home foods. In today's competitive world, each person tries to make a better life by gaining more money and also tries to not wasts it easily. To illustrate my point, my father always says me that reaching money is not far-reaching. In addition, I already calculated the money which I spend in a month for food and the consequent clearly showed me that I must pay the half of my earned money to buy food from restaurants. Besides, it is worthy to mention that I was a rich person in government's category.
To sum up, nowadays, there are number of people who subscribe the view that using the restaurant foods significantly better than the other one. Conversely, the mentioned reasons vividly show that they are in a wrong way.
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Message: Did you mean 'losing the'?
Suggestion: losing the
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
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Suggestion: months
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Message: 'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean 'told'?
Suggestion: told
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Suggestion: pass
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
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Message: 'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean 'tells'?
Suggestion: tells
...o illustrate my point, my father always says me that reaching money is not far-reach...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a wrong way" with adverb for "wrong"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...oned reasons vividly show that they are in a wrong way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, conversely, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63636363636 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73253048517 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521994134897 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0276676357 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8125 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143376677287 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456396571538 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338752723785 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884477187725 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396984124007 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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