You have a friend who lives in a city abroad. You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in this city. Write to your friend
explain what you like to do
explain what kind of work or studies you have been doing for the past few years
ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution
Dear John,
I hope you are well and sorry I haven't written to you for ages.
I am going to take a course in computer science and technology in TAFE College in Australia, Melbourne. I believe that it will improve my knowledge of computer and it will be extremely valuable experience for me.
As you may know, I have been working in IBM Company since 2005 and I have got various promotions in my job. But now I feel it is time for me to broaden my horizons and start a new experience in computer engineering. Consequently, I decide to take a course in this field to become up to date.
I surf the net to find institutes which offer this course, as a result I found 3 colleges which are highly ranked. Among them I chose the TAFE College. I would be grateful if you could contact this college and ask about terms and conditions. Moreover, I am open to any suggestion from you.
Best wishes,
Rahi Honarvar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, I hope you are well and sorry I havent w...
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Line 2, column 33, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...John, I hope you are well and sorry I havent written to you for ages. I am going ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, may, moreover, so, well, i feel, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43786982249 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63791203069 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644970414201 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.96306266 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.1818181818 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270646112678 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085943426357 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873668851753 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163895508271 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807647605538 0.0580467560999 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.88 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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