The chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
From the chart, we have got the percentage of men and women of various age groups who had taken part in regular physical activities in 2010.
In male group, highest 52.8 % belongs to 15 to 24 age group and 35 to 44 age group has the lowest (39.5) in percentage. Besides, there is only 2% difference between 55 to 64 age group (45.1%) and 45-54 age group (43.1). 65 to over age group has shown much interest as their percentage is 46.7.
In female group, 45 to 54 age group’s participation rate is 53.3%, highest in number, and 65 and over group has the lowest interest (47.1%) rate. 15 to 24 and 25 to 34 age group’s participation percentages are 47.7 % and 48.9 % respectively.
So, after seeing the male and female group, it is clear that young males were more interested to take part in 2010 physical activities program than young females. On contrary, Middle age (45 to 54) women were more enthusiastic than middle age males.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: highest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 771.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61676646707 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68122396262 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580838323353 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.8817680667 43.030603864 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.5 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8333333333 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356690005961 0.215688989381 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191229312597 0.103423049105 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125751393656 0.0843802449381 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245342297848 0.15604864568 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130950223054 0.0819641961636 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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