Which one is better? parents have to ask the older children to take care of younger children or they must take care of them by themselves.
The question is whether parents should allow older children to take care of younger children or they should do this task by themselves. Everyone in consideration to his private view point may maintain a specific direction toward this issue. Some believe that the older are not mature enough to protect the younger while others have a conviction that giving such a crucial task to the older children can guarantee their current and future life through forming their personality. I am unanimous with the latter group, so the next paragraphs will vastly elucidate my vantage point through three salient reasons:
To begin with, it is their parents' task to ask them the labors which would reinforce children's character particularly when children are in an age which can discern what type of work is good for them or bad. Labors such as taking out trashes, helping in house's work or maintaining kids will cause the older children to find a responsibility toward their family and even friends. Meanwhile, when children recognize that their family have relied on them and required some important tasks, they will attempt to do their best and gradually their self-confidence will boost; as a result, an independent personality will emerge.
In addition, one should not forget that setting children in hard conditions would challenge their abilities. For instance, the older children are involved in a wide range of activities like doing assignment, participating in the miscellaneous classes, going to pool or book clubs and playing with their peers and list goes on. Requiring extra labors may give them a power to learn how to manage their work. They need an appropriate plan to take care of their younger siblings and at the same time do their assignment or play with their friends. In such a great circumstance, the older children can become a disciplined person that is very vital for their future.
Moreover, when parents offer the older to take care of their younger sisters or brothers, spontaneously a close and friendly relationship will be formed among them. To elucidate take my own experience. When I was a kid, continuously I was struggling with my younger brother; however, later my mother could find a job and she had to spend much time in her workplace; hence, I had to take care of my brother. During several months, our relationship changed and we were behaving kindly with each other. I should confess that it was a turning point in my life.
To sum up, this conclusion could be drawn that asking from the older children to take care of the younger can provides plentiful of merits for them such as improving their management skill, becoming an independent person and even creating a friendly relationship among siblings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2291.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 457.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01312910284 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74746149059 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531728665208 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 684.0 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.6258821469 48.9658058833 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.764705882 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8823529412 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354627253193 0.236089414692 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118074163767 0.076458572812 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101387364936 0.0737576698707 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212073115552 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346408307291 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.