Writing task 1 (a letter)
You have borrowed something from your friend for a party and unfortunately it was damaged. Write a letter to your friend to apologise and say
– What and when did you borrow?
– What happened to it? Why?
– What do you suggest to do about it?
Hello Priya,
Greetings for the day.!!
I know it's not been long we have met when I have borrowed your White Party Gown. I am writing this letter to asking for apologies from you as dress was damaged in party.
As you know we have kept Black and White theme for my parents wedding anniversary party and last minute I didn't found any good gown so I have borrowed White Party Gown from you. Actually, during party I was collide with one waiter who was serving drink and all drink was fallen on my dress. I was immediately ran towards washroom to clean the dress but the stain remain same, even I had tried dry cleaning but not able to remove the stain from your dress. I know it's your favourite dress and sorry I have damaged it by mistake. But as a small gesture of sorry I have bought a new dress for you and I am sending the same via courier with this letter.
I hope you like new dress and accept my apology.
Kind Regards,
Divya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 107, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ing anniversary party and last minute I didnt found any good gown so I have borrowed ...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 208, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'collided'.
Suggestion: collided
... from you. Actually, during party I was collide with one waiter who was serving drink a...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 464, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...emove the stain from your dress. I know its your favourite dress and sorry I have d...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 768.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2905027933 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05276667047 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586592178771 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4472476253 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3333333333 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2665895225 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109169488494 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705498433869 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159161157976 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105405193269 0.0580467560999 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.