It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job.
It goes without saying that career contribute an important role in everyone's life,
therefor, choosing the appropriate job has an noticeable impact on creating desirable future.
In fact, there are individuals who are unwilling to branch out into the new and curious areas,
and want to follow their family's business. Although I really admire people who decide to look
forward their dreams and not to continue their parent's profession, I can't share the same opinion
with them. I have numerous reasons for my claim, and I am going to elaborate them in the ensuing
paragraphs.
First, since the kids have been exposing to their parent's career, they are likely more
familiar with that particular job. In this regard, they have a phenomenal chance to expand it, and
become expert in that area. additionally, they can grasp their parents valueable experiences in
order to gain more profits in the business. Hence, the family heredity can be conveyed to the next
generation, and the offspring will be able to confine the distinct expert. As a result, the
descendants have the noticeable opportunity for running a lucrative business.
Second, since the country is haunted by a constantly economic arduousness, caused by
global depression, it would be more reasonable for progeny not to take a risk in order to
start up a new business. In other words, they shouldn't be worry about financing new career,
because it is already paid. They just need to keep struggling and pursuing the previous job.
Apart from the points I made above there is also on more point that needs to be considered.
probability of succession among people who stick to their family business are much more higher in
comparison to the individuals who start up new ones. For instance, recently, a survey have been
conducted which its results indicate that, in the local spheres, family business have much more
lucrative than other sort of professions. As a consequence, novel careers probably need to strive
more than their old encounters one.
To put it briefly, I confirm the prime statement because I believe the family jobs have
greater possibility to achieve prosperity. In a nutshell, In fact, there are multiplicity of other
reasons supplementing aforementioned argues, which could be alluded, but there are not embrace due
to the dearth of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, first, hence, if, look, really, second, so, apart from, for instance, in fact, sort of, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1992.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20104438642 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78645497729 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577023498695 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5585973824 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.666666667 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2777777778 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 26.0 4.53405017921 573% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193105759988 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576745701521 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556875133353 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0474359139334 0.150856017488 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550167896084 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.