TPO 42- task 1
The passage and the lecture discuss the presented solutions for preventing the birds from crush with glasses. The reading expresses that there are three solutions for decreasing the amount of injuries of birds. Whereas, the lecturer disagrees with this methods due to having another problems for birds.
First, the passage declares that if company of glasses can make glasses with only one direction, they will be able to reduce the flying the brids through the windows. However, the professor in the lecture points out that this work is not useful because when you make a glass in one direction it is the cause glass become similar to mirror; therefore, birds think that these are sky and fly through them.
Moreover, the reading believes that the colorful glass can help to deceive birds; thus, they think that these are stripes and avoid from crushing. Nevertheless, the man in the lecture claims that if the birds think these dark things are holes they fly through, as well as, these types of glass is the cause of blacking home during days.
Finally, the passage mentions that make an artificial magnetic field in the glasses is the good factor that birds change their direction and this perform as a hinder, Although the lecture expresses that the birds use the Earth's magnetic fields for their long distance trips not short distance; hence, if they receive these signals form glasses, they will change direction to glasses.
Although the reading mentions three solutions for hinding birds from injuring of glasses, the lecturer refutes all of these ways with mentions evidence that reveal their insufficienties.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1373.03311258 99% => OK
No of words: 267.0 270.72406181 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07865168539 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34829369977 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520599250936 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 419.366225166 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 21.2450331126 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.0844170497 49.2860985944 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.666666667 110.228320801 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 21.698381199 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7777777778 7.06452816374 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393566202867 0.272083759551 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169530416225 0.0996497079465 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759876467968 0.0662205650399 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214745445137 0.162205337803 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875944552833 0.0443174109184 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.3589403974 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 53.8541721854 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.498013245 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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