do you agree or disagree that nowdays student are interested to politic
nowadays people around the world are more connected together and world has been turning to a global village because of Internet ، the high percentage of users are students therefore they get informed about political events as soon as they happen some people think students are so lazy and have unsocial characteristics be inserted in such social issues like politics wherease others hold exactly the opposite perspective.
as far as I'm concerned students seek politics news more than before . in
the ensuing paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
beside all problems which teenagers deal with in social networks such as getting involved in consumerism،paying more than enough attention to physical attractions instead of values .most of them avoid to their lives be ruined by this charming sophisticated world ,they don't tend to be just a passive man. they use social networks as a public space to spread their idea including of their political ideas ,they blame functions of governments to improve country's problems . however sometimes teenagers became just a virtual political active and it is one of the disadvantages of using of the Internet . in addition of world wide Web ,evolutions which have been occurring in recent years promote people' freedom of speech also new generation are more transgressive in comparison of the previous generations therefore politics play anow essential role in their life.
in recent century revolutions which took place in many countries ,made them more democratic following that new governments made a decision to create an open political space
therefore new generation didn't face with dictatory' environment,as result they achieved a freedom to express their own opinion and take part in country's destination . teenagers have gotten more brave to break tabos and stand for their demands ,they find politics a controversial interesting subject to discuss with their friends about it specially teens who vote for the first time.
to put if briefly ,appearance of webites and open political space got hand together to provide situations for teenagers who are more fearless to fight for whatever they want also such informed talented students know governments effect directly whether their success or their failures
In fact, there are a multiplicity of other reasons, challenging the above statement, which could be mentioned but are not embraced due to the dearth of time. .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, in addition, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2057.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35677083333 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89770252194 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.1344086022 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.890496159 48.9658058833 263% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 205.7 100.406767564 205% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 38.4 20.6045352989 186% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 5.45110844103 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 60.0 5.5376344086 1083% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107194056958 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499377638208 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388114372644 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0529962807981 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417080587956 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.0 11.7677419355 195% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 58.1214874552 42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.1575268817 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.4 10.9000537634 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.0537634409 171% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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