People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, with strongly development in many different spheres around the world, attending college or university now has become the best choice for people who want to create new opportunities in their future. As a result, each person has his/her own reasons to apply for college or university; for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge, etc. From my opinion of view, in which many reasons, the latter is more common as, prepare for a career and make more money in the job market.
Compared to high school, be at college or university certainly, you are researched in – depth knowledge and developed skill that help you create many new opportunities for ourselves to completely change future. This has actually been demonstrated by amount graduated students who have seriously preparation for career are recruited than higher the other ones no attending every year. The very first benefit is great role of knowledge and skill that we accumulated during learning process help us compete with other ones when finding job in big companies. For example, in the position of employer, if choosing between a person who is educated, have working office skills and the other no have it, I believe the first one become your employee. Besides, at university, good academic staffs with professors specialty who have high academic rank help you learn about a particular subject in depth. For instance, in criminal law lesson, basing on their own detail researches, they specifically analysis the different from causing intentional injury and committing premeditated murder that easily be wrong during solving case; from that, your preparation for career become better. Lastly, many new relationships which are developed from university as the teacher - student, the employer – student and the student - student help you create your fame for future. For example, when being a Harvard’s student, Obama was head of Student Union and he built great faith in his own leadership qualities, from that helped him receive the full support of many people in the United States presidential election of 2008. Apparently, attending in university help us carefully prepare for our job in future.
It is obvious from all the above mentioned and discussed, taking in college or university has been still to most student wisdom who graduated high school want to develop themselves and for adult need chances to succeed in future from rapport with new friends, expertise which be taught at there and many other skills like as behavior, lecture or debate.
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- People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 66
- People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 40
- People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 40
- People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
Nowadays, with strongly development in many different spheres around the world, attending col...
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Line 3, column 1683, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...y help us carefully prepare for our job in future. It is obvious from all the abov...
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Line 3, column 1694, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arefully prepare for our job in future. It is obvious from all the above mention...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, apparently, besides, first, if, lastly, so, still, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2157.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26097560976 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75604524964 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 674.1 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.7681061532 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.923076923 100.406767564 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5384615385 20.6045352989 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330992310209 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124230255876 0.076458572812 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822048148411 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237151988005 0.150856017488 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109781069519 0.0645574589148 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 11.7677419355 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 58.1214874552 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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