It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, married before finishing school have become controversial debate among public all around the world. Although marriage before finishing school and getting a appropriate job are regarded as thoroughly both constructive and positive by a considerable number of people, there are a number of people hold an opponent's view. In this essay I will discuss both sides
There are several reasons why I support getting married before finishing school and getting job is not a proper choice. First and foremost is that juveniles have to stand on their on feet and do not expect their parents to support them due to lack of money as a result of getting married before finding a career. Secondly, it is argued that students should focus on their studies to do their best on achieve the best result in their fields. Thus chose future spouse without having a job is not a wisely idea.
On the other hand there is no doubt that sooner marriage can provide people with various positive points. marriage before school in early age can help students to study harder with their spouses at home. In addition, marriage can broaden individuals horizon to enthusiasm them to finish their schools or universities, so they can find a good job in near future. For example, a group of social researcher in Harvard University undertook a study to find a relationship between more successful student who married before finish school. The result revealed that who married before finishing school three times more happy in their lives and find better jobs.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, my own sentiments is that benefits of marriage before finding a good job far outweigh it is drawbacks
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, no doubt, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 290.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9724137931 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56523913954 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.903659347 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.166666667 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318083315339 0.242375264174 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118046365037 0.0925447433944 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844696486494 0.071462118173 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182081629032 0.151781067708 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693540493649 0.0609392437508 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.