It is argued that getting married before Finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The importance of married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice which was always debatable has now more become controversial with some people say that it is beneficial and much people reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion , the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate negative viewpoints and lead to logical conclusion.
There are myriad reasons which will further elaborate the arguments but the most prepoderant one stems from the fact that firstly, whwn people married before any good job or before finishing school they are not mature. and not get any job. they are dependent on their parents, which plays crucial role their personal life. For instance, In a Rajasthan much parents married their child in early age, he get difficulties in after few months related to financial problems and their future.
Elaborating my viewpoints, there are some demerits but one of the crucial effect their financial growth and they not enjoyed their teenage life, which is most important part of their life. For instance, in early age childrens are not well mature and they get some difficulties some situations.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach toa conclusion that tha drawbacks their upcoming future and income growth are indeed too dire to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...me people say that it is beneficial and much people reject this notion. The substant...
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Suggestion: ,
...al impact in recent years. In my opinion , the former proposition appears to be mo...
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Suggestion: And
...e finishing school they are not mature. and not get any job. they are dependent on...
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Suggestion: They
...ey are not mature. and not get any job. they are dependent on their parents, which ...
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Suggestion:
...ot mature. and not get any job. they are dependent on their parents, which plays ...
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...nt on their parents, which plays crucial role their personal life. For instance, ...
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... role their personal life. For instance, In a Rajasthan much parents married thei...
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Suggestion: many
...nal life. For instance, In a Rajasthan much parents married their child in early ag...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...ts married their child in early age, he get difficulties in after few months relate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, well, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23504273504 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66229988016 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598290598291 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4798074226 50.4703680194 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.363636364 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175015302437 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754724981025 0.0925447433944 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0985822921997 0.071462118173 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954383560803 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821671330819 0.0609392437508 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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