Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help local community.
The believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?
It has been widely assumed that all students should be forced to do voluntary work in their spare time to help local residents. Also, many believe that this would be beneficial for both sides. In my perspective, I agree with this idea.
On the other hand, teenagers can certainly help themselves by doing unpaid work. Firstly, they can obtain a lot of experience about their society through volunteer. For instance, working at Hanoi Youth Club- a volunteer organization with offer free tour for foreign tourist- enable their member to broaden their own knowledge about history and culture of Hanoi. Secondly, having some volunteer work experience bring them more advantage when applying for their job or university place later in life. It enhances their resume and indicates a willingness to work and to learn in a practical way.
On the other hand, the community also benefits from unpaid work done. Firstly, it is true that there is a shortage of labor in many parts of the public sector and if young people worked, then many services would improve. For example, it would be possible for teenagers to take care of patients in a hospital and it would allow trained professionals to concentrate on more skilled tasks. Furthermore, volunteer work was done by student also might save a great deal of money which is used for wages of the workforce. This could allow authorities to spend that money to improve welfare – something that would benefit society as a whole.
In conclusion, I believe that working as volunteers can be beneficial for both young people and society, and unpaid work should be compulsory for all teenagers
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a practical way" with adverb for "practical"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ates a willingness to work and to learn in a practical way. On the other hand, the community a...
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Suggestion:
... work and to learn in a practical way. On the other hand, the community also be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97445255474 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62058281933 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594890510949 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8909985323 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3571428571 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348964682404 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117233947855 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799277020998 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228484450909 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659279781845 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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