Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the twentieth century, people’s life has been changed to what scientists call as modern life. In spite of all advantages of the new lifestyle, it brings a number of complicaions in people’s lives, particularly to that of the young individuals. Therefore, in order to keep up with the rapid pace of life, I personally agree with having a specific plan for our daily lives. The benefits of being organized are discussed in the following passage.
The first and the foremost reason why I support having daily plan is that it provides one with an opportunity to save time. When a person prioritizes the daily responsibilities in a to-do list plan, he or she is able to accomplish all of them in a determined period of time. What is resulted from such a faithful plan is to do more in less time rather than making a mess. Therefore, an organized person would definitely expect to fulfill all his or her commitments during the day. A housewife, for example, can easily make an accurate plan to get the whole house chores done in the morning to have enough free time to spend with her children for the rest of the day.
Furthermore, saving money is one of the greatest advantages of being organized. Although it may seem confusing at first, making a plan of necessary and unnecessary issues allows you to be more focussed on the essential things to spend money on. Unfortunately, modern life is associated with luxuries such as eating at expensive restaurants or buying costly furniture and clothes. A plan would truely directs individuals to pay money for the thing that it is essential for a routine life. As a result, they find this plan a good guide to not to waste their money.
Finally, being organized is a great way to make life more enjoyable. If people have a particular plan for their life, it is quite likely for them to make some time enough free to spend with their family or develop the fields of their interests. Moreover, having a plan for the whole week reduces the stress of the heavy workload so people are able to enjoy their leisure time with a light mood. For instance, an organized family could obviously make weekends a brilliant chance to have a trip or to go to an amusement park.
Overall, taking into account all these factors, I strongly believe that being organized in the modern life not only helps the young save time and money, but also it brings joy to their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1990.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67136150235 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70592425116 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521126760563 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6174798763 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.736842105 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4210526316 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05263157895 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258345154513 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796268576204 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054477659754 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142336578639 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517083842665 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.