Nowadays more tasks at home and work are being performed by robots. Why do you think it is happening? Is it a negative or positive development?
Human lifestyle is pampered in the lap of technology. Presently, robotization is coming into existence in order to assist human beings in their daily affairs. As a result, the use of robots is spreadings its roots from distinct working sectors to home boundaries. This essay intends to discuss reasons and mention this trend has more drawbacks than benefits.
There are multifarious reasons behind this happening. First and foremost,
employing robots is supposed to bless us convenience, quality in the work and time saving opportunity. To demonstrate, robots working through programming wor...
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Essay evaluation report
the use of robots is spreadings its roots
the use of robots is spreading its roots
This essay intends to discuss reasons and mention this trend has more drawbacks than benefits. //mention is not used properly here
This essay intends to discuss reasons, and mentions that this trend has more drawbacks than benefits.
are reduced at larger extent
are reduced to a large extent
at alarming rate.
at an alarming rate.
Sentence: To commence with, unemployment is claimed to be the biggest negative outcome of this phenomena.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and phenomena
Sentence: Presently, robotization is coming into existence in order to assist human beings in their daily affairs.
Error: robotization Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Further emphasizing on my point of view, making use of robotization seems more economical as compared to human labour as buying robots is one time investment whereas employees are paid every month.
Error: robotization Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: To recapitulate, undeniably, the tendency towards robotism has brought some positive results.
Error: robotism Suggestion: No alternate word
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flaws:
1. when two paragraphs are used to support 'Why do you think it is happening? ', only need one idea for one paragraph. Don't need two ideas for one paragraph, like you did in the third paragraph.
Further emphasizing on my point of view, ...//one idea
Last but not least, ...//another idea
plus the idea in the second paragraph, we have 3 ideas.
why we make two paragraphs? because one idea may be too long, so we make the idea in one paragraph.
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2. transition words are too much. don't need one transition word for one sentence.
3. need some relative clauses. we see that the verbs for most sentences are either 'is', 'are' or 'may'.
4.No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 359 350
No. of Characters: 1845 1500
No. of Different Words: 214 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.353 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.139 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.733 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 148 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 115 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 77 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 47 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.318 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.911 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.455 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.288 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.496 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.053 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f technology. Presently, robotization is coming into existence in order to assist...
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Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hind this happening. First and foremost, employing robots is supposed to bless us...
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Line 6, column 394, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ensure excellence in the work along with comfort for mankind. Further emphasi...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...rk along with comfort for mankind. Further emphasizing on my point of view, making...
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Line 8, column 296, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...igh-tech era. Last but not least, robots are electronic machines and can work in ...
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Line 10, column 132, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...d to be the biggest negative outcome of this phenomena. To illustrate, ever growing ...
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Line 12, column 104, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...brought some positive results. However, i reiterate my opinion by saying that exc...
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Line 12, column 223, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a negative outcome for the whole world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, whereas, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32033426184 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84410799232 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58495821727 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8890996396 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8181818182 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3181818182 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68181818182 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147213685713 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464978531881 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307921896691 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0739099783666 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357634514206 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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