Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
This world is very demanding from us to reach the happiness. And having friends is one from the best happiness sources of our life. In spite of some people prefer making large new friends in every new single stages in their life,And in my point of view I prefer to have a small number of close friends over a long period of time for different reasons. And the impact of my opinion will be analyzed in this essay to further explanation.
First of all, having real friends these days is a very crucial, and the main reason that why I believe that is over a long period of time they became like our sisters or brothers. Furthermore we now every things about each other, and the relation built over years and years on respect each other also, the trust and we know the importance of this trait because when I trust someone i can share with them all my life small details. For example, one i was in the school i faced a huge problem with other colleagues and in this case my old best friend helped me to solve the problem without any further complication.
Secondly, on the other hand, I find it is very hard to understand new nature, and to know new information by having new friends. For instance, my best friends all the time they remember my birth day every years, and they know what i prefer and what i do not like. Moreover, all the awesome moments we lived it with each other like going to national parks or malls and these things we cannot make it by new friends.
In conclusion, I think my point of view is strong and solid enough to illustrate all the previous reasons that I mentioned above, and I believe that having few number of persons over many years is better than having new one with short time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39184952978 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26765188343 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.4399566454 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.363636364 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.6045352989 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2727272727 5.45110844103 262% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226395385433 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834709298417 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571529931925 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145365697543 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246400732446 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 58.1214874552 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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