Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is a big debate on working for a ling period of time over three days or to work for shorter time over five days with feeling comfortable or enjoyable. In my opinion it is better to work three day but for longer time for a different reasons. And my view will be analyzed in this essay for further explanation.
First of all, reaching the maturity indicate selecting the best job that fulfill their passion to work on their desire job. And there are a myriad of criteria that the employee should be aware to ward it. On the one hand, the working hours and if it is all the week days or not. Indeed, working longer time but for three days is the best choice because the worker will has the rest of week free to do all what he want. And the vivid example is my brother, he is a student engineer and also he work as a research assistance with his professor. On the other hand, if he works all the week days he will not be able to study in right way.
Secondly, the most important reason that support my standpoint is that people can put all their attention in their job so they the productivity will increase and will get the maximum benefit. Moreover, the worker will manage his time without complication. For example I am a nurse and I am working three days for twelve hours that is right i face a lot of tasks on my day but on the other hand i will get the rest of the week holiday and I set with my family longer time.
In conclusion, I think my point of view is strong and solid enough to illustrate all the previous reasons, and I believe that working three days for longer time is better than working all the week because it will consume your crucial time and will not have a time for your family or for your social life.
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'reason'?
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22222222222 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2397289468 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456456456456 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.6198038286 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.153846154 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 5.45110844103 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289257072263 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12016530814 0.076458572812 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807607940536 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198908005121 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034390894344 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 58.1214874552 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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