Children should always follow their parents parents advice.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is undeniable that family plays an important in our life. So, some people think that children should always follow their paretns' advice. However, other claim that this is not always right. I think that children should follow their parents' advice when they are young, but they should become more idependent when they are mature.
On the one hand, young children do not know the difference between right and wrong, and a parent is a best person to teach them about this. For example, a young child does not know that it is wrong to take things that do not belong to them. In addition, parents can also teach children about dangers, both in the home and outside. For instance, electricity is a very dangerous thing for children. So, families should teach young children stay away from electrical euipment.
On the other hand, when children grow older they shold pay less attention to their parents because they can spendmore for their friends. Parents might tell a child which career to choose and this should be the child's decision because when they grow up, they can realise that right or wrong thing. Besides, they want to do anything what they like without follow their parents' advice. Sometimes, parents want to tell their children how to live, how to behave, but when they are grown up, they can decide for themselves. If a child make their own decisions, they might grow up to be less independent or strong.
In conclusion, parents need to give young children advice on morals and satefy, but not on how to live when they are older.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 101, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...etween right and wrong, and a parent is a best person to teach them about this. F...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 3.15609756098 444% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 5.60731707317 660% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 965.302439024 132% => OK
No of words: 269.0 196.424390244 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73605947955 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22269395791 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509293680297 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 365.4 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8102964869 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9333333333 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28202420787 0.215688989381 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112778985755 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074573955507 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181818670109 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633825765742 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.42 8.06136585366 80% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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