you have been told that dormitory rooms at your university must be shared by two students.would you rather have the university assign a student to share a room with you or would you rather choose your own roomamte?
The days that we spend in university are precious days that every person in older days of his life want to come back to those days. One of the things that we do in university is finding new friends,communicating with people,learning social life. So the ability to communicate with people is a must. Dormitory is a place to communicate with people. Some people think that living in a dormitory with a person that they know is better while other diagree. In my opinion when we want to live in a dormitory,we want to learn more social life so we should pair with everyone.
First,we can find new friends. Finding new friends and communicate easily is the basis of starting adult lifes. For example,I had been accepted for a university that was out of my city. So naturally I had to take a home or dormitory.The price of houses in that city was so high,because I went to the capital of my country,so I had to go to a dormitory. At that time I had three roomates!At first it was so difficult for me,because I was grown up in a big house with my own room,they were so dirty in my opinion,I couldn’t understand them, but after spending some time with them I learned that they are very friendly and good friends. Nowadays sometimes I miss them a lot that I cry!because we lived together for four years and we became like each other families. So I think that we shoud have enough tolerance to survive in today society!
Second,we will be independence! If living in another city,far from our family,we should provide the needs of our life by our selves,so step by step we will be independent. For example, when I first went to another city I was so scared because I didn’t know anything except studying. At first I was so difficult for me,I didn’t know what to do,I didn’t know how to buy a thing. One day I was so hungry,I didn’t have anything in refrigerator,so I didn’t have any option except buying and cooking some thing for myself.It didn’t become so delicoius but not so bad for the first time,so after that I grew self confidence and started cooking more and more food!And I master it. So with this experience I say that it is very good for you to become independence.
In sum, though some may think you should live with a person you know but living with more people not only help you to survive in society in the future but also help you find new friends. We should be some how that every one can tolerate and live with us!
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, while, for example, i think, you know, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 80.0 43.0788530466 186% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2017.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52242152466 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.837722762 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464125560538 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 655.2 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.2298078031 48.9658058833 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.157894737 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4736842105 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78947368421 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.5376344086 560% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12227401624 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441886895527 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501300248312 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927348383172 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574055008647 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.