It is difficult for people in the cities to get enough physical exercise. What are the causes and solution?
It is true that residents of industrialised cities are hard to get sufficient physical activities. There are several causes of this issue and some solutions could be proposed to help people to promote the rate of having physical exercise.
There are many reasons why most people feel hard in exercising although they all know it is good for their health. Firstly, people spend too much time on their jobs. Some people want to pursue success , they often choose working overtime instead of going to the fitness center. Furthermore, to save time for working, people prefer riding motorbikes or driving cars to cycling bicycles although cycling is a better way to keep their health. Secondly, big cities often invest in building modern infrastructure and lack of zones for exercising. Therefore, people are lazy going to the park for movement or fitness center because these far away where they live.
Several actions can be taken to abstract people more concern about physical exercise. The first solution would be building more parks where people can walk or do some exercises such as aerobic, yoga and constitutional. Additionally, more lanes should be built to serve only cyclist. This would encourage people to use bicycle more often. The final solution is rasing citizens awareness of physical activity in healthy. This can be done by promoting the benefits of exercise through TV or public transportations. This will help people understand well the good things of exercising.
In conclusion, there are some reasons why physical exercise are facing to difficulties to the citizen in the city and solutions should be produced early to promote physical activity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22304832714 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7330447504 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591078066914 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2627132879 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8125 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8125 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289913496497 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916103789584 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619346460837 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189694753918 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720737859537 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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