in some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Discuss
discuss advantages and disadvantages for young ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Give
... for young people who decide to do it. give reasons for your answers and include an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 13.1623246493 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 41.998997996 5% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 155.0 1615.20841683 10% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 28.0 315.596192385 9% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53571428571 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.30032663379 4.20363070211 55% => The fourth root words length is low.
Word Length SD: 2.87028228719 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 24.0 176.041082164 14% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.857142857143 0.561755894193 153% => OK
syllable_count: 47.7 506.74238477 9% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 14.5 49.4020404114 29% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.5 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 7.06120827912 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106208761427 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846047853307 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519570357502 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846047853307 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519570357502 0.056905535591 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.26 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 10.0 78.4519038076 13% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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