Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has had a mostly positive effect on society.
Today's world have been changed dramatically from the past. Many different devices have been invented during history. Without any shadow of doubt, TV is one of the most important ones which had a great impact on human life style. Thus, considering the advantages and disadvantages of TV seems so important. I, myself, subscribe to the idea that positive aspects of TV outweigh those negative ones. With this in mind, I believe, it has quite a few positive features among which, helping people to become more creative, becoming aware of news all around the world, and spending their leisure times are of great importance.
To begin with, it is crystal clear that a person can benefit from a program and learn many different kinds of new information from it. Every day, quite a few programs are produced in order to help people become more successful in their life. For instance, consider entrepreneurial programs which are trying to help people to become more creative in their jobs and make more money. By watching these kinds of programs, a person might learn many new ways to become more creative in his or her businesses. From this point of view, a more prosperous society could be estimated.
Secondly, one of the most important role of TV in any society is providing accurate news for the people. With improving different media channels which provide different kinds of news for people, people can get news from different sources. However, the crucial point is the accuracy of news. TV, is one the most reliable resources that people trust. Furthermore, by watching TV, one becomes aware of crucial matters around him or her; In this regard, we must consider that increasing awareness of society is another vital matter in development societies.
Last but not least, nowadays, TV is one of the most entertaining sources for a person which can be used to fill his or her free times. Besides, it helps family to gather together in order to watch movies, serials, documentaries, to name but a few. Hence, TV helps families to become warmer and spend more time together. As all we know, family is the first foundation of any society where people learn morality; so, we can conclude the more family spend time together, the more moral society we have.
In sum, with all this taken into account, having a happier families in society, more creative and aware people, would not be possible if we do not pay attention to the role of TV in society. Therefore, allocating proper budgets in order to create appropriate and beneficial programs seems integral.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'Many'.
Suggestion: Many
...een changed dramatically from the past. Many different devices have been invented during histo...
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Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...on can benefit from a program and learn many different kinds of new information from it. Every...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2132.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92378752887 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61413508524 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526558891455 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 674.1 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2285579471 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9090909091 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6818181818 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0721530941304 0.236089414692 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0220501616708 0.076458572812 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031699916044 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0492990810515 0.150856017488 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350321930598 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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