Do you think it is better for students to work before their university study? Why? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.
Some people say that students should take up employment before joining a university to continue further study. I would completely agree with this opinion as the practical experience gained will help students to perform better in their academics and moreover, will give them financial freedom. This essay will explain this in detail.
First of all, students who work in the area of the specialized course which they intend to study at a university, will greatly help them in understanding the concepts faster and will score better when compared to the students without job experience. They can correlate the academic lessons with the hands-on knowledge they gained during their employment. This is quite evident when we examine the report, published by University of Michigan that the students who have prior work experience, scored better in their academics when compared to those who doesn’t have job experience.
Secondly, there are monetary benefits. Working in a firm will give the students the financial freedom and some students can even be able to pay their tuition fees with the money they saved during their employment. This gives them a sense of responsibility and will make them feel proud of being independent. While interviewing a professor at Cambridge University, he mentioned that students who pay their tuition fee with their hard earned money, would often feel responsible and work hard to achieve good grades in their exams.
In summary, taking up an employment in their relevant field of study will help students, who wish to study at a university. This will also make them financially independent. In the future, more students are likely to take up an employment before starting their education at a university.
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We live in an age, where…
We live in an age, where some people think students should work before their university study while others think it is not good for students to work before their university study. There are both aspects of views to this thought. This essay explicates both the postulates along with my rationale in forthcoming paragraphs.
First and foremost, it is worth without saying that it is good for students to work before their university study because it will give them practical work experience. consequently, their scores will improve. To illustrate, one of my friend's son's scores in subject finance improved by 30 % after received practical experience from his previous job in finance. it helps students to save funds, which they can pay for their higher education, Eventually, it gives them a sense of responsibility. To illustrate, a recent survey by Times Of India revealed that 20 % of students felt more responsible towards their study as they paid their university fee by their savings, earned from a job.
On the other hand, work before higher education can deviate students from their studies. Consequently, it will difficult for them to start academic education after a long break. To paraphrase, a recent survey by the Education council revealed that 30 % of students had not taken admission in higher education courses after doing the job. Moreover, Students can forget multiple lessons during the gap years, Eventually, their performance will decrease. For instance, a recent survey by one of the institutes revealed that students' performance decreased by 20 percent in mathematics as they are not able to understand concepts because conceptual gaps occur due to long break.
In a nutshell, it goes without saying that students should work before doing higher education as it gives them a sense of responsibility and better scoring.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in summary, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24642857143 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77758658639 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.3980884071 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174613780355 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652303759177 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484903070126 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114899203259 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0125978554085 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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