Do you think the consumer should avoid over packed products or it is the responsibility of the producer to avoid extra packaging of products? Give your views or any relevant example.
Nowadays, the question “whether over-packaging the products are the responsibility of the producers or not?” has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world. It is a widely held view that an appropriate package for goods is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common view that the style of packaging products plays a vital role in the world of business and marketing. To put into consideration, I express why I don’t support extra packaging of products. First and foremost is that over-packaging is excessively detrimental to the ecosystem because an extensive range of them are not biodegradable. Secondly, it can be argued that the poisonous gases that are emitted from them lead to the destruction of the environment, such as rivers as well as sea. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that the majority of packages are non-disposable and subsequently the survival of wildlife will be threatened. A group of biologists, working at prestigious university conducted that widespread use of packages will deteriorate our environment in the future.
However, there is no doubt that extra packaging the products provide people with various positive points. It should be taken into account that advocates of over-packaging think that goods seems so glamour and attract customers to purchase more satisfaction. Moreover, they emphasize that the durability of products will be increased.
To recapitulate, I entirely disagree with over-packaging so that some informed decision must be taken into account to address the negative effects of this matter. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce strict legislation, and the individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... the producers or not?' has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, in addition, no doubt, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37414965986 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27915148585 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3993206153 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.538461538 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203883187071 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703791597039 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505653718838 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124025798772 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563864238671 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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