Large shopping malls are replacing the small shops. What is your opinion?
Mall culture is becoming the widespread since last many years because it provides variety of products and services under one roof. It also covers the wide range of collections of restaurants and retail shops. This essay is going to discuss the both positive and negative effect of mall before reaching to conclusion.
There are myriad benefits of having Supermall. First of all, parking is one of the main hassles for the people which is available in free or at nominal rate. This is considered to be most advantageous for the people to shopping at mall rather than shopping at shop. Furthermore, shopping malls often consider a place for outing with family and friends for hangout. In addition, another advantage of visiting mall is we get the most of the required thing under one roof and with attractive price. For example, it is noticed that for achieving sales target, they offers the huge amount of discount and various offers.
On the flip side, we can consider that super malls are always crowded with people which make shopping difficult for individual. Moreover, due to the attractive schemes people sometimes buy things which they don’t need. Parking is also a problem when mall is excess crowded.
To sum up with this, The temptation is always present, and browsing often leads to purchasing unnecessary things which overall affect the monthly budget so depends on the need of things one must visit supermall.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'offer'
Suggestion: offer
...d that for achieving sales target, they offers the huge amount of discount and various...
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Line 4, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s excess crowded. To sum up with this, The temptation is always present, and br...
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Line 4, column 214, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eed of things one must visit supermall.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, in addition, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01680672269 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54037380058 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609243697479 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.474506791 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8461538462 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128665193189 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480000640391 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485567838065 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0710579109924 0.151781067708 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421170453367 0.0609392437508 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.5 Out of 90
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