What is the best invention of the last 100 years: the computer, aviation, medication, and explain why?
It is very conspicuous that the world has experienced numerous revolutionary developments in the way people live. Thanks to the array of innovation of modern science, from computing, aviation, and medicine. In my opinion, I believe that these have created a boon for the society and every individual. This essay is going to provide you rational argument in the favour of inventions.
There are myriad benefits of the invention. Firstly, by using the computer, internet, and a number of software and other available tools, not only teacher make notes effectively but the student can also enhance their horizon with ease, convenience. Secondly, the internet being an indispensable part of the computer, people are no longer separated and detached from each other except In terms of geographical location. Further, Facebook, Whatsapp, and many other social tools people use today to keep in touch with personal, social, and professional life.
To go in deep, thanks to the performance of the computers by which the efficiency and accuracy level increases and less human errors are being part of daily life. Apparently, with the help and contribution of the computers, it has greatly reduced the human involvement. In addition, with the help of science and technology, in the field of medical, it has drastically changed the way it works in past. For instance, there are various websites available on which one could surf and check the possible symptoms and cures of disease.
To sum with this, from the above reasonable evidence one can conclude that nothing is comparable to the computer because with the help of single innovation it helped us in infinite ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 270.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18888888889 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.858340382 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614814814815 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 3.65517241379 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7116695995 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.769230769 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.25397266985 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.029181083926 0.242375264174 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00944451638576 0.0925447433944 10% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0177809018552 0.071462118173 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0151330703798 0.151781067708 10% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015556313425 0.0609392437508 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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