integrated essay TPO14
The reading illustrates arguments about that the salvage logging is useful for both economic and damaged forest. The professor contradicts these theories by the following strong evidence.
Firstly, in the reading, it is said that it would be good option to help the new treescan to grow in the condition that dead trees are an obstacle for them. On the contrary, the lecture refutes the argument by stating that the natural decomposition helps to enrich the soil to be suitable for the future trees. Therefore, removing the dead trees using the salvage logging is a menace for fortifying the soil and therefore the new generation of the trees.
Secondly, even though the reading claims that the dead trees is a suitable teritory for the insects like the spurce bark beetle that high population of them damage the healthy spruce trees and the salvage logging presents a good idea to deal with this problem, the professor argues in the lecturer that the salvage logging not only is not a habitat for those insects, it also has a negative effect on the ecosystem in that area such as the bird and other insect living that play a vital role in forest healthy in the long term.
Thirdly, the passage says that the salvage logging is beneficial in terms of economic. However, the professor mentions an opposing view that since that present a costly because need some equipment such as helicopter. Furthermore, the job opportunities caused by it for the local residents are temporary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1373.03311258 90% => OK
No of words: 251.0 270.72406181 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90039840637 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5663865452 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557768924303 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 419.366225166 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 131.901010395 49.2860985944 268% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.666666667 110.228320801 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8888888889 21.698381199 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4444444444 7.06452816374 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400451001571 0.272083759551 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146139434157 0.0996497079465 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108262683627 0.0662205650399 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225683687843 0.162205337803 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733433170692 0.0443174109184 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.3589403974 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.8541721854 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.0289183223 114% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.42419426049 109% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 63.6247240618 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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